Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Dont kiss them Good bye by:Allison Doubois

5comments:
  1. Is there another way to describe insincerity? Well obvioulsy not..... a criminal could never be sincere.
  2. Only on certain circumstances will a criminal be sincere about where he would put his victim.\
  3. I dont think that criminals have a descent excuse for killing people. Also known as a homicide.
  4. There shouldnt be a reason for killing people anyways.
I hate the way people say they are sorry and they really are not. It is just so stupid dont say something that you dont mean. That just hurts people in the ned and makes everything worse. Dont people understand that other people have feelings besides them ? Obviously NOT.

4questions:
  1. Why in the world do people lie? Is just makes them more ugly and stupid.
  2. I hate when the criminals just stare the family dead in the face after they have been convicted of something they did to their loved ones. It seems like a slap in the face.Why do they do that?
  3. Can you please give me another way to spell out weirdo?
How do you complain about a gift that helps so many people? Well does it ever get annoying to others that you can do things they cant?

3words:
  1. wrong:The opposite of correct.pg115
  2. deceit:To lie and bring harm to ones way.pg127
  3. Fundles: bags of european goods."pg123
2literaty terms:
Imagery: "There he was all red in the face blood speared from the gun and the coward ran."pg122
Metaphor:"There was the ramsy in the middle of the lane he was the definite beats."pg126

1overview: There we reach the end of the story she still continues to work with the police and solve cases till this day.

Thursday, June 4, 2009

Dont kiss them Good bye by:Allison Doubois

5comments:

  1. Oh my goodness Allison has gotten herself in some deep trouble.
  2. I dont know why but reading this section gives me chills.
  3. there should be a logically reason why Allison thinks she is being haunted, it is probably because there is more than one person who has died that is in the case and she feels attached to the case.
  4. I dont think that Allison should become that attatched to the families that she works with because then she will regret it in the long run if things dont worl out.
  5. should the ghost or whatever help out with the case really.. I dont know.  
4questions:
  1. How old is the victim that died?
  2. Is there another victim?
  3. Well then how old is the criminal?
  4. How many ways can you describe an ugly person?
3words:
  1. rambunctious:noisy and lacking in restraint or discipline.pg99
  2. trembling:shaking.pg107
  3. flattered:Flattery often, but not always, connote insincerity.pg110 


2literary terms:

Similie:"There is another way to go through the pain like the lions take on their bate."pg69
Metaphor:"I can se you are the goddess in this mess you call a creation."pg78

1overview sentence:Suddenly there is a new certain place where the criminal put the body and there will be a new discovery of the many bodies to come.

Dont kiss them Good bye by:Allison Doubis

5comments:
  1. oh my goodness she needs to find the girl.
  2. I am going to cry if thos case is not solved succesfully.
  3. What in the world is Allison thinking... Obviously she is not thinking.
  4. I need to know how lond the person has been missing.
  5. They should have put the important information first.

4questions:

  1. Will she ever solve this case?
  2. Is there another way to find out the criminal?
  3. Is there anymore evidence?
  4. What in the world was Allison thinking when she was in the middle well right in front of the criminal?

3words:

identify-recognize as being.

transfer-transfer somebody to a different position or location of work.

tranquility-repose: a disposition free from stress or emotion.


2literary terms:
Imagery:"And there I was in face with the bloody sustained killer, his devil eyes met mine and we linked for hours."pg
Simile:"I felt like I let then down like my weakness let me down."pg
1overview sentence: Allison is solving more cases and is finally putting criminals behind bars, Well help with the police of course.

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Chp4-6Dont kiss them Good bye by:Allison Dubois

5comments:
  1. wow she helps with the the missing children.
  2. I wonder how many times it takes to get a lead.
  3. There is another way to do the investigation.
  4. I know now that it is not so easy to figure out a case.

4questions:

  1. How long does it actually take to solve an investigation?
  2. Is there always a dent in the road when it comes to having to get a lead in an invetstgation?
  3. Is knowing more of a consequence?
  4. I dont understand why she becomes so attached to her victims?

3vocabulary wrds:

  1. relinquish-release: part with a possession or right.pg45
  2. noting-widely known and esteemed.pg43
  3. inprisoning-lock up or confine, in or as in a jail.pg46

2literary terms:

Metaphor-"My victinm is merely a stepping raod when it comes to the investigation."pg34

Similie- "It is like your my destiney and the criminal is just a figmet of my imagination."

1overview:Allison is begging to use her gift by generally solving investigations and using her powers for good."pg44

Sunday, May 24, 2009

Chapter 1-3 Dont kiss them Goodbye by:Allison Dubois

5comments:
  1. It was kind of weird how Allison thought that if she had a pinky ring could be more connencted to her father.
  2. Allison must have felt weird when she saw her grandpa's spirit.
  3. What the heck is Allison thinking ..ride home, the men are trying to abduct you.
  4. I wonder why people abduct children.
  5. Would they want their children to be abducted.

4questions:

  1. Why did Allison take it so hard when her father died?
  2. Why is Allsion blaming God for his death?
  3. Is death really all about falling apart?
  4. Was it hard looking @ her father's pictures?

3words:

  1. relinquish-release: part with a possession or right.pg8
  2. solace-consolation: the comfort you feel when consoled in times of disappointment,pg8
  3. revel-To undergo.pg9

2literary terms:

  1. Metaphor: "Everything had all smeared together into an ugly distorted mess"pg6
  2. Metaphor2:"When I am given information from the other side that benefits my client, or even helps to save a life i am still a vehicle."pg7

1overview: Allison's father is totally going down into the grave he is dying from heart failure, he eventually dies and then she tries to mend over his death.

Saturday, April 25, 2009

God Dont Like Ugly by:Mary Monroe

5comments:
part of chpter52
  1. There must be a new way to describe the way Annete is feeling.
  2. I dont buy that she she is always happy Rhoda must have an inside.
  3. There must be a way where Rhoda could be compared to Annette in a nice way
  4. They are total opposites when it comes to appearence
  5. They are evn closer when it comes to their indside.


4questions:

  1. Why doesn't Annete feel beautiful?
  2. Can their be any hope for her?
  3. What new character would appear or be mentioned next?
  4. Can there be a new way to be approcached than how Rhoda was?


3vocabulary words:

  1. exhilarating-making lively and cheerful; "the exhilarating effect of mountain air".pg280
  2. ponder-chew over: reflect deeply on a subject; "I mulled over the events of the afternoon"; "philosophers have speculated on the question of God for ..."pg264
  3. wrench-twist or pull violently or suddenly, especially so as to remove (something) from that to which it is attached or from where it originates; "wrench a window off its hinges"; "wrench oneself free from somebody's grip"; "a deep sigh was wrenched from his chest".pg248


2literary terms:

Imagery:"The deepness is a s deepness as the sea and the ending of disputes begin."

Metaphor:"My mother is an enclosed drawr she is only taken out whenever someone gives her a ride"
1overviewsentence:Annetes mother is suddenly becoming more cautious of her daughter and she is realsiing what Mr.Boatwright has been doing to Annete and other girls as well.

God Dont Like Ugly by:Mary Monroe

5comments:
chpter53

  1. I like the way that the author is making somewhat Annete feel like she is a women.
  2. It is wonderful how you can change a charcter in a certain way they speak or what they dress.
  3. That is outrageously cool, I wonder if you can always do that?
  4. I woulld never sell my body if I had to feed my children like Annete did that is just something else.


4questions:

  1. What did Annete feel like when her mother went with Scary Mary to the crack house/whore house?
  2. Is there another way to complain ?
  3. Whay did Mary Monroe want the man character to be Annete?
  4. Is there certain someone that Annete has her eye on?
  5. Will she ever find love.. That sure would be a mystery wouldn't it?


3vocabulary words:

  1. mystery-something that baffles understanding and cannot be explained; "how it got out is a mystery"; "it remains one of nature's secrets".pg323
  2. love-a strong positive emotion of regard and affection; "his love for his work"; "children need a lot of love".pg315
  3. height-the vertical dimension of extension; distance from the base of something to the top .pg317


2literary terms:

Imagery-"Her evr sensing lips are red and shivering with thin cold sores."pg343

simile-"It is like the sense of mind when it comes to thinkin about you."pg342
1overviewsentence:Annete may have found love or not it all depnds on the last mind of her essence. It is all what would become of her and her friendship with Rhoda now that she is gone.